Episode 32: Some tips on revising

In Episode 32, we talk about lots of different elements of revising. We decided to do this episode because Olivia is about to (probably) embark on a revision of her novel, and Meghan’s wrapping one of hers, so she had some wise words to share. We talk about lots of stages of revising and rewriting:

  • revising as you go (if you’re a better first drafter than we are)
  • rewriting
  • “breaking” your story (see link below)
  • mapping out character arcs
  • working with a developmental editor or writing coach
  • managing tension and adding sensory details

We also give a shout-out to our (erm, Meghan’s) favorite books about revising:

DIY MFA: Write with Focus, Read with Purpose, Build Your Community by Gabriela Pereira
The Last Draft 
by Sandra Scofield
Suck it up and Revise by Alicia de los Reyes
Anatomy of a Story by John Truby

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Theme music is “It’s Time” by Scaricá Ricascá.

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Mentioned in this episode:

WMFA Episode 14 with Jennifer Haigh

“Breaking” a story, a term borrowed from screenwriting

DIY MFA: Write with Focus, Read with Purpose, Build Your Community by Gabriela Pereira

Fyodor Dostoevsky

Elizabeth Gaskell

Ann Radcliffe gothic novels 

George Eliot

Anne Lamott and the theory of the “sh*tty first draft”

Meghan’s blue and red pencil

DIY MFA’s subway-style plotting maps

DIY MFA revision pyramid and podcast episode

Suck it up and Revise by Alicia de los Reyes and her revising episode of Scratch Paper

Our interview with Alicia de los Reyes in episode 11

Sandra Scofield’s book The Last Draftand Caroline Donahue’s interview with Sandra on The Secret Library Podcast

Iowa Summer Writing Festival

Anatomy of a Story by John Truby

Kit De Waal talking about her spreadsheet on The Secret Library

Scrivener writing software